AI About Page Test: What Happened When I Tried It

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Stephanie Pleasants

A web designer and digital strategist helping women entrepreneurs create stress-free websites that attract clients and grow with their business. Through Instanticity, I share simple web design, blogging, and SEO tips to help you show up confidently online.

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I was playing around with a test website so I let AI write my About page while juggling laundry, lunch prep, and a late client website update. (Because of course I did.)

The results? Well, somewhere between “actually helpful” and “please never say that again.”

If youโ€™ve been staring at your own About page thinking, Is this boring? Too braggy? Do I even have one? Been there. Writing about yourself is weird. And if AI can help make it less weird? Worth a try, right?

Let me show you what happened when I put ChatGPT to work on mine.

Why I Tried AI in the First Place

Writing about yourself is hard, even if you’re a professional copywriter.

Iโ€™ve helped write dozens of About pages for clients. I know the structure. I know what works. But when it came to writing my own? My brain short-circuited.

I was short on time, second-guessing every word, and curious if ChatGPT could at least give me a decent draft. So I asked it:

“Write an About page for a female web designer who helps small business owners build strategic WordPress sites. Make it sound friendly, confident, and supportive.”

Spoiler: I got exactly what I asked for. But not what I needed.

The First Draft, Not Gonna Lie, It Was Rough

The Good

  • It had structure: headline, intro, values, mission, CTA.
  • It followed a logical flow I could work with.
  • It saved me from starting with a blank page (which, to be honest, is half the battle).

The Not-So-Good

  • It sounded like a robot trying to be my best friend.
  • Phrases like “Iโ€™m passionate about empowering entrepreneurs to reach their full potential” made me cringe.
  • It didnโ€™t sound like me. At all. It missed the quirks, the personality, the human-ness that makes connection possible.

Helpful? Yes. Publishable? Absolutely not.

Making It Sound Like Me (The Real Work)

This is where the magic actually happened.

I took the bones of what ChatGPT gave me and rewrote it in my voice. I swapped the robotic โ€œpassion statementsโ€ for real-life stories, added a line about designing with a cat on my keyboard, and cut the filler fluff.

For example, instead of:

โ€œI specialize in creating strategic solutions for your online presence.โ€

I wrote:

โ€œI help small business owners stop duct-taping their websites together and finally have a site theyโ€™re proud to share.โ€

Way more me. Way more useful.

Tip: If you use ChatGPT for copywriting, treat it like a rough draft – not a done deal. Think of it as a writing buddy, not your voice twin.

What I Learned From Letting AI Write My About Page

Hereโ€™s the truth: AI is a helpful shortcut. But you still need the map.

You are the only one who knows your voice, your values, and your story.

Hereโ€™s what I realized:

  • AI content writing works best when you direct it.
  • You canโ€™t outsource personality.
  • People connect with people, not with perfect grammar.

Should You Let AI Write Yours? My Honest Take

When It Helps:

  • When you’re stuck on where to start
  • When you need help with structure or flow
  • When writing feels like pulling teeth and you just need a nudge

When It Doesnโ€™t:

  • When you expect it to magically sound like you (spoiler: it wonโ€™t)
  • When you hand it all the power without giving it direction

Tips to Try:

  • Feed it a few paragraphs of your own writing
  • Paste in past client emails or testimonials to teach it your tone
  • Be specific: tell it what to include and what to leave out

ChatGPT for copywriting isnโ€™t plug-and-play. But it can be part of the process.

The About Page Still Matters

If youโ€™re tempted to skip your About page or settle for whatever your template came with, please donโ€™t.

This is the page where trust begins. Itโ€™s where someone says, โ€œOh, she gets it.โ€

If writing yours feels like pulling teeth, AI can help. But donโ€™t skip the part where you show up.

You donโ€™t have to be clever. You donโ€™t have to be fancy. But your story? Itโ€™s worth telling.

And you donโ€™t have to do it alone.

Ready to Try It?

If youโ€™re curious, open up ChatGPT and give it a shot. See what it says. Then make it yours.

And if you want some About page copy tips that actually sound human? Start here: About Page Tips

Need help shaping your About page into something personal and powerful? Letโ€™s chat!

But, most of all, if you want to use AI to help you write, you definitely need a Brand Book!

Youโ€™ve got this.

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